SOMETIMES

SOMETIMES

We climb out of the dark for sunrise,
into night from the evening.
Somewhere in there
the fish bite.

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5 responses to “SOMETIMES

  1. bob

    this is not the one you read yesterday. this is a phony one. the other one was much darker. where’s the real one!!

    • Fishingpoet

      Ha! Thanks for the brutal honesty 🙂
      Call it poet’s license…
      The poem, in the end, is these four lines. The rest, while adding more darkness, felt like notes on my way to the center, rather than part of the center itself.

  2. bob

    THAT’S A BUNCH OF HORSE FEATHERS!

  3. Hmm…now I want to read the one bob is demanding =)
    Beyond the curiosity, I enjoyed this very much~ Beautiful picture as well….

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